成考专升本英语作文写作要点分析(1)

　　第一部分 写作授课要点

　　短文写作总分20分。短文写作部分要求考生写出一篇80字左右的短文。题材以记叙文为主，试卷可能给出题目或规定情景或段首句。

　　短文写作的要求为：能够正确表达思想，意义连贯，无重大语言错误。

　　写作内容涉及生活，一般常识和私人信件。

　　短文写作中的题目我们也可以称作命题写作。

　　情景写作也就是便条写作。

　　段首句式的写作可以称为主题句式的写作。

　　一、英语写作训练的要点

　　英语写作最重要的一点是用英语思维进行写作。

　　通病：习惯于先把作文翻译成汉语，然后逐字翻译成英语。

　　在理解和使用英语词汇时，要注意英语和汉语在意义上的不同。

　　中文：我得努力学习，要不我就要落后了。

　　错译：I should study hard， otherwise I would be backward.

　　正译：I should study hard， otherwise I would lag behind.

　　说明：“backward”是形容词，意为落后的，向后的或缓慢的，(表示性质);“lag behind”是动词词组，意为落后，落在后面(表示动作或行为)。

　　中文：你不要学我样，你身体没有我好。(指：情况不一样。)

　　错译：Never learn from me，since you are not so strong as I am.

　　正译：Don't follow my example， since you are not so strong as I am.

　　说明：“Learn from sb.”指“向某人学习”，并不是“照我一样做”的意思。

　　中文：由于时间关系，我就到此为止。

　　错译：Due to the time， I should stop here.

　　正译：As time is up (or： limited)， I am afraid I have to stop here.

　　说明：“due to…”是“由于……之故”而导致某种结果的意思，本句用due to 不合逻辑。

　　accept和receive， permit和promise， call one's name和call one by name.

　　accept 收到(接受)

　　receive 收到(不一定接受)

　　permit 允许别人做某事

　　promise 允许为别人做某事

　　call one's name 骂某人

　　call one by name 叫某人的姓名

　　所以我们在从事英语写作训练的时候：

　　1.要明确英语写作的意义。

　　2.要学习和掌握必要的写作理论。

　　3.要通过大量的阅读，新概念第二册比较适合。

　　二、如何限题和写提纲

　　定题：选择恰当的题目。

　　命题：“Teaching”

　　过于笼统：Teaching

　　仍较广泛：Teaching Number Concept

　　范围缩小：Teaching Number Concept to Children

　　范围明确：Teaching Number Concept to Children at Five

　　命题“Child Behaviour”

　　过于笼统：Child Behaviour

　　仍较广泛：How Children Play Together

　　范围缩小：How Girls Play Together

　　范围明确：Patterns of Play Among Primary School Girl Students

　　写提纲的好处：1. 可以扩大思路

　　2. 可以按次序排好素材

　　3. 将文章分成段

　　4. 明确写作的中心思想

　　“The Advantages of Travel (旅行的益处。)”

　　根据这一题目，在构思时可能会想到以下内容：

　　1.seeing strange and different things (看到各种奇异的东西)

　　2.meeting people with different interests (遇到有各种不同兴趣的人)

　　3.keeping us fit and healthy (有助于身体健康)

　　4.enjoying beautiful scenery (欣赏各地美景)

　　5.understanding how people live (了解人们怎样生活)

　　6.visiting famous cities and scenic spots (浏览名城和名胜)

　　7.tasting different foods and local flavours (品尝各地风味)

　　8.getting ideas of the conditions and customs of other people (了解各地风土人情)

　　9.arousing the fervent love for our motherland (激起对祖国的热爱)

　　10.gaining knowledge of geography and history (获得地理历史知识)

　　11.making one less narrow minded (使人心胸开阔)

　　12.gaining other knowledge (获得其他方面知识)

　　13.seeing places read of in books (目睹曾在书上读到过的地方)

　　I. enjoy places of interest

　　a. enjoy beautiful scenery in different places (4)

　　b. see places read of in books (13)

　　c. visit famous cities and scenic spots (6)

　　II. know people and their customs

　　a.meet people with different interest (2)

　　b.see strange and different things (1)

　　c.get ideas of the conditions and customs of other people (8)

　　d.taste different foods and local flavours (7)

　　e.understand how people live in different ways (5)

　　III. benefit us both mentally and physically

　　a.gain knowledge of geography and history (10)

　　b.gain other knowledge (12)

　　c.arouse the fervent love for our motherland (9)

　　d.keep us healthy (3)

　　e.make one less narrow minded (11)

　　The Advantages of Travel

　　Travel is beneficial to us in at least three ways.

　　First， by traveling we can enjoy the beautiful scenery in different places. We will see with our own eyes many places read of in books， and visit some famous cities and scenic spots.

　　Second， we will meet people with different interests and see strange and different things when we travel. We can get ideas of the conditions and customs of other people， taste different foods and local flavours if we like. In this way， we can understand how differently other people live.

　　Third， travel will not only help us to gain knowledge of geography and history and other knowledge， which arouses the fervent love for our motherland， but will also help us keep healthy and make us less narrow-minded. Travel does benefit us both mentally and physically.

　　With all these advantages of travel， it is no wonder that travel has now become more popular than ever in China.

　　在写100字左右的作文，我们也强调三段论。第一句话或第一段我们强调我们要写的内容，第二段找一些例子阐述一下。第三段再次把我们强调的内容引申的说一下。

　　三、文章的三个部分

　　引言 introduction

　　正文 body

　　结束语 conclusion

　　引言 introduction

　　1. When you are waiting in front of a theatre or at the train terminals， you will realize how important punctuality is. Punctuality is really a virtue， especially in a busy city like Shanghai. Perhaps if everybody were punctual， there would be less suffering and sorrow.

　　正文 body

　　2. Punctuality is the main constituent of good character. A person， who is always in time for his appointment， shows real consideration for others. On the other hand， a person who is always late shows his selfishness and thoughtlessness and he is not worthy to be friend with.

　　constituent 构成

　　selfishness 自私

　　3. Some people often say that they cannot always be punctual since traffic is so heavy these days. I think traffic congestion cannot be an excuse for being late. As everybody knows that we might meet an unexpected congestion on the roads， we should leave a bit earlier for the appointment to ensure that we would not be late.

　　traffic congestion 交通堵塞

　　4. Some people always have a lot of excuses for coming late. When they finally arrive， they keep on saying sorry to their friends and then explain. The excuse is not always traffic congestion， sometimes they complain that they have met a friend on the road or have helped a blind man to cross the road. Some also like to blame their watches， the clocks at home or in the office. To such people， we cannot help but say sorry that we have come too early.

　　keep on doing sth. 一直做某事

　　5. Yet after all such smart fellows will soon find that gradually their friends become fewer and fewer. Perhaps at that time， they would realize how important punctuality is.

　　结束语 conclusion

　　6. To be or not to be punctual is a habit. So when we are young， we should try to be punctual every time and never be late for it is much more easily acquired in youth than when we are older.

　　The person I shall never forget

　　The person I shall never forget is Qingfengxiang. She is the best friend in my life.

　　She often listens to me when my mood is bad. Moreover， she usually gives me some advices if I need help. Sometimes， she lends money to me if I want to buy some new clothes.

　　I will never forget her help even though I already left Wuhan city. I think that she will be one of the most important person during my life. I hope that the friendship of us will keep forever.

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　　I will never forget her help even though I have already left Wuhan city. I think that she will be one of the most important persons in my life. I hope that the friendship of us will keep forever.

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　　She often listens to me when I'm in a bad mood. Moreover， she usually gives me some advices if I need help. Sometimes， she lends money to me if I want to buy some new clothes.

　　Why We Learn English

　　English is an international language now. Everyone needs to know English.

　　When we will visit a great number of different places in the word， we need to talk about local person with English. We are interesting in books， otherwise nowadays many of the valuable books are written in English or translated into English. We in order to go through ones， so we should have a good command of English.

　　We should try our best to learn the English language well.

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　　When we visit a great number of different places in the world， we need to talk about a local person in English. Nowadays many of the valuable books are written in English or translated into English， so if we are interested in books， we should have a good command of English.

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　　We should try our best to learn English well.

　　专升本英语作文考试中，语法一定要简明扼要，而且要正确。

?全国2008年成人高考成绩查询汇总