雅思考官对于小作文有哪些建议?

Don't copy the question for your introduction. You should paraphrase the question (i.e. rewrite it using some different words).

不要把问题照搬照抄放在你的引言当中，要用不同的单词重新把问题改写一遍。

Don't forget to separate your paragraphs clearly.

别忘了清晰地分开每一个段落。

Don't forget to write a good summary/overview of the information. A quickone-sentence conclusion is not good enough. I prefer to put the overviewstraight after the introduction, and I try to write 2 sentences describing theinformation in general. You won't get a high score if you don't write a goodoverview.

不要忘了将所得的信息很好地总结/概述一次。一句话的结论并不够好，一般来说，我更倾向于把概述后直接放在引言后面，并用两句话来描述信息。如果没有一个好的概述，就不会得到一个好的分数。

Don't describe items separately . You should always try to compare thingsif it is possible to do so. Instead of describing 2 lines separately, comparethe 2 lines at key points.

不要单独地描述一个点，如果有可能的话，尝试去做一些对比。同样是两个句子，将它们的关键点进行比较说明，好过单独地进行描述。