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雅思G类作文-投诉信怎么写?分享两篇“投诉信”高分范文以及解析

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【摘要】雅思G类作文-投诉信怎么写?这里为大家分享两篇“投诉信”高分范文以及解析,帮助大家学习此类作文的写作结构:

G类作文 投诉信

雅思G类作文资料之投诉信应该怎么写为你带来雅思培训类G类写作的第一篇作文的其中一种类型——投诉信的写法和范文的解析。在雅思培训类的作文中,此类信件的作文取代了学术类的图表作文,成为了part1。而此类的信件作文又可以根据信的内容和目的,分为几个类别。我们今天就来看其中的投诉信的写作方式。

备考雅思写作,很多烤鸭都离不开剑桥雅思。市面上关于雅思G类作文的相关资料相对较少,最有说服力的考官范文更是寥寥无几。终于,好不容易盼来了剑十的横空出世,也为G类考生增添了两篇考官范文以做学习参考!G类的小作文大多数都是以书信形式展开的,这一形式本身决定了它与A类小作文有着很大的区别。但仔细分析一下题目,基本万变不离其宗,下面我们就来分析一下几类典型书信。

雅思G类作文资料——投诉信范文1

题目:

A night club just opened near where you live. You are very unhappy about the situation because it disturbs the peace of the neighborhood. Write a letter to your local government official. Say who you are and explain why you are unhappy and suggest what should be done about it.(投诉信)

范文:

Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m writing to express my dissatisfaction with the horriblesituation I have been faced with recently.

亲爱的先生、女士:

我写此信是要就我最近所面对的可怕状况表达我的不满。

I’m a resident of Rose Park on St. Johnson Street. I had been enjoying my life since I moved here five years ago. However, a nightclub recently opened right across the street from my apartment block has completelychanged everything.

To begin with, the club itself is very unsightly. It has blackened windows with sexually explicit pictures displayed on the outside, which I find extremely offensive. Also, the noise level during the early hours of the morning is so intense that it has really disturbedmy sleep. Consequently, I find that I am unable to concentrate fully on my job, as I am often too tired.

首先,这家夜总会本身就很不堪入目。其窗户搞得黑乎乎的,外面贴着相当淫秽的画,这一点令我感到尤其难以忍受。此外,凌晨时刻的噪音太高,严重影响了我的睡眠,所造成的结果是由于太过疲倦,我无法全力专注于工作。

I work as a surgeon in the local hospital; therefore, I am sure you can see the gravity of my complaint. Indeed, the consequencesof my making any mistake due to my lack of sleep can be very serious indeed.

我是本地医院的外科医生,因此,我相信您能够看到我投诉的严重性。事实上,由于我缺乏睡眠而造成任何错误的后果将是十分严重的。

I understand that, as a member of the local government, you have the power to close the club down. Nevertheless, I know very clearly that people need to make a living and I would not like to be responsible for people losing their jobs. Hence, if you could please ensure that the offensive pictures are removed, and the noise level is kept to a minimumlevel, I would be more than satisfied.

我深知,作为当地政府的一员,您有权关闭这家俱乐部。然而,我也很清楚:人们都需要谋生,而我也不愿意对他人失去工作而负任何责任,因此,如果您能确保那些令人难受的画被撤掉、噪音控制在最低水平,我就将十分满意了。

I look forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Kenny Gao

期盼得到您的答复。

您真诚的

Jack

雅思G类作文资料——投诉信范文2

题目:

You have recently made a purchase from the local department store. However, when you arrived home, you found a faultwith it. Write a letter to the manager, say what the product is, explain the problem and say what you’d like to be done about it.(投诉信)

范文:

Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m writing to complain about the recent purchase of a woolensweater from your department store on Philip Street, on August 25, 2007.

亲爱的先生、女士:

我写此信是要就我 2007年8月25日从你们在菲利普大街上的商店里购买的一件羊毛衫进行投诉的。

I recently washed the sweater in cool water, as per the instructions on the label. However, when I removed it from the machine, the garment was stretchedout of shape and no longer fits.

我最近按照标签上的说明用冷水洗了这件羊毛衫,然而,当我将它从洗衣机里取出时,这件衣服却变形了,再也不合身了。

I phoned the store last Tuesday (June 21) and spoke to the department manager, a Mr. Morris, who was rather rude on the phone and informed me that I could not get a replacement sweater as it was purchased at a reduced price. I felt really upset, for I have been a loyal customer of your store for many years and until this incident, never have had any complaints. I, therefore, feel disappointed to be treated in such a manner.

我上周二(6月21日)打电话到店里,是与一位叫Morris先生的部门经理讲的,他电话里很是无礼,告知我说因为这件衣服是降价购买的,因此不能退换。对此,我深感不满,因为我多年来一直是贵店的忠实顾客,在此事件之前,从来没有过任何投诉。因此,我对受到如此待遇深感失望。

I would, however, be perfectlysatisfied if you would kindly replace the sweater or refund my money, whichever is more convenient.

然而,我的要求并不高。如果你们能够给我退换一件,或者为我办理退费,怎么方便就怎么办,我都会非常满意的。

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours truly,

Kenny Gao

期盼收到您的答复。

您真诚的

Jack

以上就是雅思G类作文资料之投诉信应该怎么写的全部内容,对于G类的雅思写作,资料比A类的要少很多,希望这两篇范文能成为雅思培训类考生的备考资料。从范文可以看出,书信类型的写作采用典型的倒金字塔的叙述方式,即先叙述目的,再展开原因。考生们可以模仿这样的写作框架。

小编在此提醒各位备考生,分享的范文的目的是为帮助考生了解高分作文的写作结构及模式,并不等于全文背诵会得高分哦。想要拿高分,还得自己多总结多练习。更多雅思备考资讯,青藤资讯将及时与您分享,尽请关注!

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